Your hands are at the very bottom, huge and in sharp focus. They are positioned just below your chin. Since you are looking down at them, the viewer sees the tops of your hands and the intense action of picking under the nails. The Middle Ground (Your Face): Because the camera is low, we see your face clearly even though you are looking down. Your eyes are the emotional center. They are cast downward toward your hands, but because of the angle, the viewer can see the "well" of tears in the corners. The Hero Detail: Use a high-gloss finish on your eyes. Inside the pupil/iris, paint the tiny, sharp silhouette of the package. It’s like the mistake is literally "stuck" in your vision. The Background (Top of Frame): Your mom looms over you from behind (or slightly to the side). Because of the low angle, she looks massive, like a statue. The Speech: The word "TOMORROW" starts near her mouth in bold, solid letters. As the letters "fall" toward your ears, they should break apart into dust or transparent bubbles, showing them disappearing before they "land." Mehr sehen